A Review of Jonathan Moody's "Olympic Butter Gold" by Kristofer Collins

Olympic Butter Gold
by Jonathan Moody
TriQuarterly Books / Northwestern University Press, 2015





Let's go back, say ten years or so, and check in at Nico's Recovery Room in Bloomfield. That's where on any given night a motley crowd gathered at the rails of the bar puffing determinedly at Camels and 'boros and indulged in mid-shelf liquor and watery local brews. The crew of regulars carried on a shouting call and response with the lottery drawing that taunted them from the TVs mounted above the bar, while somewhere in the back room, nestled in the recess of an undersized booth, you could find the poet Jonathan Moody and myself engaged in beerspillingly intense discussions about those things which so generously offered us an entryway into the deeper mysteries of life, namely comic books, old film noir flicks, and our favorite records.

And being young men of a certain peculiar persuasion we also spent our many hours, here measured out in pints rather than teaspoons, in earnest deliberation, often to the point where our basket of fries had become a frigid landscape of congealed grease and crusted yellow cheese, about the mechanics of poetry.

The puddles of beer we left on those knotty, overly lacquered tables bore witness to our mutual fervor. We were acolytes and poetry was our religion. Bob Kaufman, Frank O'Hara. Speaking their names was to invoke their spirits. The books we had scattered around the table might as well have been a Ouija board brought forth to summon dead writers to our booth to share a drink. We must have been a sight, gesticulating and roaring with laughter and tossing chapbooks around. 

Eventually, though, Moody finished his MFA at the University of Pittsburgh and moved with his wife Shadé to Houston where he teaches high school English classes. His second poetry collection, Olympic Butter Gold, won the Cave Canem Northwestern University Press Poetry Prize.

Olympic Butter Gold is impressive work. It is at once an ode to Hip Hop and rap music's golden age as well as the poet's coming-of-age story. The history of the music intertwines with the history of the man so that the kid who “made loot on the side teaching / Germans at Rhein-Mein Air Base / the art of B-Boying.” grows into the man teaching the poetry of Byron and Tennyson to a disinterested classroom, finally connecting with his students through the poems of Tupac Shakur. It feels like Moody is completing a circle when he writes,

Dear 2Pac, Daniel, the youngblood 

chilling in the back, cracks open my copy 
                                                                of your book. He admires the page the way 
he admires his Cool Grey Jordans. 

Dear 2Pac, Daniel, who yesterday refused 
                                          to copy notes on enjambment 
& end-stopped lines, handwrites your longest 

poem word for word.

 (from Dear 2Pac) 

The music that started in the housing projects of Brooklyn has traveled through time and space to arrive in this Houston classroom to facilitate mutual understanding and connect Daniel to a continuum of language and art.

I asked Moody about that poem which was based on a real incident. “So much of the poetry that gets shoved in the face of teenagers, at least in Texas, is poetry that they need an expert to explain. Depending on the MC, though, a student might not need me to interject. Teaching poetry to public high school kids has been an adventure to say the least. The majority of the kids I've taught fear it because they aspire towards attaining a certain level of authority that isn't practical: knowing specifically what the author intended to say in every line. I encourage my students...that there's value in uncertainty.”

And why Tupac specifically? “Tupac deals with issues that some of my students have dealt with: particularly with watching a loved one succumb to addiction. But to be perfectly honest the main reason why my students relate to Tupac is because his poetry rhymes.” Moody summed up the experience with a wink,“You would be amazed at how much difference it makes if you hand high school students a copy of a free verse poem as opposed to a rhymed verse”.

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Moody's first collection of poems, The Doomy Poems (a self-deprecating play on the author's own name) centered on, well, a doomed relationship between the speaker and a woman named Irina. There is a mixtape sequence in that collection that brilliantly condenses the relationship to a track list. Music has always been a golden key to Moody's poetry. If his earlier work used a short-lived romance as a lens with which to look at the world of the speaker (both an interior world of emotional upheaval and an outer, but still very personal world of literature, film, and music) then his latest poems trade the microscope for a telescope and via the lens of rap music the poet observes a much wider universe.

Moody cracks open this larger world in biblical fashion with a genealogy connecting the speaker to the gods who preside over Olympic Butter Gold,

I am the son of DJ Kool 
Her-Her-Her-Her Herc,

weighing in at two turntables 
& a microphone. 

Son of a goatskin drum 
speaking patois 

… 

Son of a milk crate loaded 
with nickel bags of funk 

(from Son of a) 

That's the sound of Moody dropping a needle on a cosmic groove. The 'I' is the same I who sang Whitman's body electric boogaloo, the same I whose dreams were deferred right along with those of Langston Hughes in that grand Harlem shuffle. In the beginning there is the glowing light of the On switch and the silence is banished by the crackling static of a James Brown jam.

“I can't recall which came first, me hearing Kurtis Blow's “Basketball” playing on my father's brown radio-jukebox hybrid, or me attending a carnival and witnessing German teenagers partaking in the four Hip Hop elements (rapping, dj-ing, b-boying, graf writing). I do remember , though, that I was six years-old and living in Frankfurt, Germany, near Rhein Mein Air Base.” Moody's own Hip Hop genesis happened overseas. He was a true son of Afrika Bambataa's Planet Rock. “I do remember that both events took place in 1985, which was also the same year I saw that seminal scene in Breakin' when Turbo's A.D.D. Causes him to dance with a broom instead of sweeping the sidewalk like Ozone asked him to.” Moody interrupts his own reverie to observe, “The wild irony that went over my African ficus-like Afro was that turbo was b-boying to Kraftwerk's “Tour De France”. The deeper cultural significance of a young black man from the projects dancing to a track by a German art rock outfit is no longer lost on the poet.

“I grew up an only child, so I had no hip older sibling who guided my musical palette,” Moody recalls. “I was a military brat and didn't spend time with any extended family during my formative years. It wasn't until I lived in the States again (Ft. Walton Beach, Florida to be exact) and became a teenager that I developed a solid rapport with my cousins from Georgia and Alabama; a relationship in which we prided ourselves on having not only the best collection of rap cassettes and CDs, but also the most obscure – ranging from Ice Cube's Death Certificate to Kilo's debut America Has a Problem.” 

That insatiability for new sounds is on full display in Olympic Butter Gold where the lines skip, break and scratch across the page in wild displays of ingenuity. It's no coincidence that the poet Adrian Matejka said that reading Moody's poetry was “like rediscovering your favorite mixtape only to find out the thing has been reworked by Madlib.”

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Jonathan Moody is a father now and as much as Olympic Butter Gold can be understood as a paean to Hip Hop, exploring the culture from its humble beginnings and its growth outward into a real Planet Rock, the book is also a very intimate epistle to his son. This is the tender voice of a father setting his son straight on how it was for him coming up, and all of the hopes and fears boiling inside as he looks into the eyes of his child,

I've passed down my fear 
of the police to my baby boy 
who always sleeps, frozen, 
with his hands in the air. 

(from Paranoid) 

Paranoia, fear, helplessness. How do we protect our children from a world that feels all too often to want nothing more than to hurt them?

Years ago hiding out in a dark corner of a Bloomfield dive bar Moody and I filled the smoky air with endless words that tried, but were ultimately ill-suited to conveying our dreams. Language is like that, always trying and failing to conduct the electricity of our hearts. Words are the tools of a poet, but what can we hope to accomplish with them?

“My body of work doesn't have the power to fire a police officer or shut down the government,” Moody admits. “My poetry can, though, bring about awareness,” he says with both resignation and hope, “which is all we can expect a poem to accomplish.” 

If the work of poetry is to create empathy (and I believe it is), to place the reader inside the soul of another human being and create a new understanding, then Jonathan Moody, as a poet, a teacher, and a father, in every page of Olympic Butter Gold, is a man on a divine mission.


Originally published in a slightly different form by 1839 Magazine.



Kristofer Collins is the editor of The Pittsburgh Book Review.

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